Give me your thoughts on this, I know it may seem wierd behind this but it will make sense in the second part.

The Fly Lord

"..We shall end them my brothers.." said the rotting daemon prince known by the name of The Fly Lord. His armour rusted and brittle from the ages of battle, his skin a rotten disgusting shell of it's once proud self many milla ago. "..That we shall.." he said in a quiet voice to him self. "Come brothers! Let us spread the taint of Nurgle to all!" The Fly Lord begins to walk foward towards the onward battle where already his forces are destorying the forces of mankind. In the distance a huge creature arises apon the land as the flylord begins to change into battle screaming with such evil sound that the Imperial Guard who heard it screamed, "It's the Fly Lord!! He has come to destory us next!! Retreat!!" the guardsmen began to retreat in a panic. The Fly Lord using his sword begins to cut down the retearting guardsmen as he contenues to charge foward leaving any that were alive for his brothers to deal with. In the distance an loud roar invelpis the battle field as the creature soon over loooks the battle field yelling for all to hear. "Kill them all!!..." The Fly Lord grins as he spots a comminsar shooting a few fleeing guardsmen to restore moral the fly lord says, "Your next puny human.." The comminsar seeing a daemon charging at him yells "Fire!!" as a battle cannon goes off from a hidden leman russ was near by in a ruined building. The daemon prince getting caught in the blast gets apart of his torso blown off. Still with out pain he charges and screams at his loudest. "Die you pathic human!" he swings his sword at the comminsar before he could react cutting him in half, apon doing so his brother plague marines in terminator armour charge the leman russ stationed in the ruins in the distance. Determind to kill the Imperial Commander of this battle he looks at his wound and laughs then contenues on in the battle as a explosion of a tank happens and a half of a terminator body goes flying ahead of the fly lord. He looks at the body and realizes what happend and sighs as he contenues on. Guardsmen on a hill with a armory ahead looks to be a place for a HQ he figures and gets on his vox. "Gun crew.." he says, "Yes my lord how can we be of help?" A traitor guardsmen replys over the vox. "I need a bombardment on the armory on the hill near my location alpha 42," the says again as he sees a few panicing guardsmen trying to protect some cilvilans begings to charge as he hears on the vox, "It shall be done my lord.." the sound of altery fire fills the air as he swings his sword at a guardsmen with a flamer. The guardsmen watching his fellow soldier die infront of him yells, "God no!! Die foul creature! Return from where you came!!" the guardsmen fires his gun in a futual etempt to destory the creature. "Ha...Haha.. Hahahahaha!" The Fly Lord laughs, you shall be a prime member of my legion.." he says as he touches the guardsmen using nurgles gift as the guardsmen begins to turn into a members of nurgle he screams in tarable pain. "Don't worry the pain will be only for a moument.." The fly lord says, as he sees the cilvilans trying to hide behind rubble from a building. A girl walks out and says, "So.. You came as I saw in my dreams.. You must be the one known to be the fly lord correct.." the fly lord slightly shocked that this girl knew of him replys quicky. "I am, I am here to destory all on this planet and raise a bigger legion." He boasts, "Not with out me.. I wish to join, for nurgle wishes of it.." the girl grins. "Really?" the fly lord replys, "If that is the case then are you prepared for pain? It is only for a moument but it will feel like a eternity.." the fly lord states, "I am," the girl replys. "Then so shall it be.. I shall call you Dian, the fly keeper." he says as he touches the girl giving the gift of nurgle.

end of part one

"Brother Jakfor" the fly lord calls on the vox "Yes my lord.." brother Jakfor reply's with a evil sound in the voice. "I need you here at 40 alpha, there is a girl here that has joined us but I wonder why if nurgle as a plan for her.. Protect her with all your men lives until nurgle tells us why.." "Roger, we shall protect her at all costs my lord!" the fly lord looks at flashes behind a hill in the distance of cannon fire as the great unclean one slowly try's to reach that zone it is bombarded with furious amounts of shelling, "I wonder.." the fly lord says on looking the battle as he awaits for Jakfor and his squad to arrive. The great unclean one raising his sword swings onto the land as a shell hitting him directly in the chest seemed to have undone what the fly lord worked so hard to make. "Damn it!. The cursed false emperor's war machines seem to have gotten lucky.. But how much luck will they have with the plague pods.." the fly lord grins at the end of his sentence, "Come in Plague Bringer. This is Lord Lucius come in" waits a second as a respond comes in. "We read you loud in clear my lord.. How can we aid our plagued brethren?" "I need you to drop in all the plague bears on our battle barge onto grid gamma 95 heavy amount of tank fire in there and a surprise dropping in from the air shall aid of greatly. Plus with there presence we might be able to bring back the tool of nurgle!" "We shall shed there blood with the finest warriors on the ship my lord. Plague Bringer out."

As Jakfor arrives with his squad he yells. "Lucius!" The Fly Lord turns, "Yes Jakfor?" "Did I hear you are about to drop in all the plague bearers??" "Yes.. It shall be a blood soaking like no other.." Lucius laughs with delight of the thoughts of the slaughter coming. "Problem is that they have anti air guns implanted all over! Our plague pods with our warriors are going to be shot down and the tactic will be useless!" "Hmm.. Plague Bringer, cancel the order.. We must dispatch with the anti air defense first." the plague ship responds "Roger we will be on stand by" Jakfor.. I shall see you later. Till then call in a thunderhawk and get her into one of our ships." Lucius states with anger. "I shall my lord! Now go and deal with the problem at hand! I shall be there to aid you when I can!" Lucius charges forward towards a small cliff facing and leaps off into a valley of the once proud city Raven's hollow. Upon landing the ground gives slightly away of his weight. He takes a moment to prey to nurgle. "Nurgle! I seek your aid once again! I am in need of wings so that I shall get to the objective faster!.. Please Aid me my lord!.." Upon finishing his pray he goes into a great and terrible pain. His back begins to mutate violently as wings push out of his rotten back, Already rotten to almost just bones for wings he grins and says, "Thank you my lord! I shall not fail you!" he begins to fly with great speed keeping low along the ground he notices towards the north of that ammo dump that he called in the alltery on suddenly blows up! The ground shook from the sheer mass of the explosion! "Pathetic fools" he says in a content voice. Not paying attention around him from the explosion a las-cannon shot fires glazing his shoulder taking off most of the meat in that area the fly lord quickly uses his wings and gets into cover in one of the buildings.


End of part two.

I know they are taking a bit here.. But please enjoy and let me know whatcha think.

The Imperial guard was cunning to hide and set up a Ambush as they did the fly lord thought to him self. An evil grin set upon his face at the joyful thoughts of killing the over confident mortals who dare strike a champion such as him self. He flew up into the air coming down onto the unready guard that were so sure of killing such a beast. He swung his mighty sword into the panic guardsmen, as the sword connected with there las-cannon coming into them they pulled the trigger setting off a chain reaction that set the ammo to explode. The blast killed the squad of guardsmen and sent the daemon into the wall of the ruined building. His torso reign blown open from the blast his intestines spewed onto the ground. Not caring the fly lord said. "It will take much more then that to kill me!" In anger he arose from the blast allowing his intestines to dangle Noticing the ruins were more unstable and flew upward before they gave out. When reaching a decent height cannon fire of a squad of leman russ began to fire as the words of guardsmen followed. Noticing to be out numbered the fly lord fell back. "Come in Plague Bringer" the fly lord yells into his vox, "Yes lord," Crewmen reply in a hurry to air there lord. "I need a planet strike in gamma 17 to 24 destroy it all!" Lucius demanded fast. "Hang tight sir, firing now.." the ground began to shake as the area became brighter and brighter. A commissar in that area screamed "RUN! They are firing there ships cannons!" the guardsmen and leman russ crewmen rushed to get out. But regardless of there attempt to flee the strike came out and set ablaze onto the land. "Trial.. By fire.." Lucius said as an evil laugh followed with out hesitation. "Now to destroy them cannons," he said shorty after the laugh of watching the area burn. He flew as he gets onto the vox. "To all units in gamma. Re focus your efforts towards 95." he hears multiple units responding as the firing of auto cannons and bolters began to lit the battle field.

End of part three,

Sorry for how this keeps breaking up but I work my best at near pass out status it seems.

awesome job